Senior comp narrative answers

• Does my narrative involve the reader? Yes, my narrative involves the reader. I tried to make as many similies that help the readers really understand what i was seeing at the time.
• relates events in sequence? Yes, my story stays in order from the beginning to the end. i always always try to set up an image in the readers head of where i am at.
• includes detailed observations of people, places, and events? My story includes some detail about people, places and events.
• presents important changes, contrasts, or conflicts and creates tension? In my narrative, i try to create contrasts, and conflicts with me during the battle and the food fight at Denny's.
•  is told from a point of view--usually the author's point of view? My story is diffidently told from my point of view.
• focuses on connection between past events, people, or places and the present? My narrative connects the past and present together because at the end, it shows a lesson i learned throughout the process the battle.
• makes a point, communicates a main idea or dominant impression? The narrative doesn't really communicate a main idea, it's just a time in my life enjoyed instead of a life lesson.