1. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why?
My partner's essay had many moments that were very descriptive.

2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give

your partner that will help his/her paper improve?

His sentences were mixed up at times, but i generally understood what he was saying.

3. What is your favorite literary device used in your partner’s essay?
I enjoyed the metaphors in my partners essay.
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
The most catchy part about my partners essay was how he described the scence with the dam and how how descriptive he was when talking about his fishing expirence.